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That Wow Moment

Posted on 12th June, 2025

This week, A New Home at the Wartime Hotel has aceived a big milestone - it has over 1,000 reviews and ratings on Amazon - 1,125 to be exact, at the time of writing this. Wow! That's less than three months after publication. Wow again.

 

 

I want to say a huge thank you to everyone who has left feedback. It really does make a difference to a book's visibility.

 

Incidentally, I've been asked about that 'Book 1 of 2' under the star rating. No, it doesn't mean there are going to be only two books in the series. In fact, I'm busy writing book 3 at the moment. The '1 of 2' just means that only two so far have been put on Amazon.

 

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That's it for this week. Just a very short blog. As well as writing Dunbar's book 3, I've also got to write not one but two synopses, as well as a new series proposal, so I've lots to keep me busy.

 

See you next time xxx

 

It's always exciting to receive copies of my books. Most recently, I received copies of the audiobooks of A New Home at the Wartime Hotel, narrated by Julia Franklin.

 

 

 Here they are - in MP3 and CD formats.

 

It is enormously important to me to have my books available in audio. I firmly believe that we never grow out of enjoying being read to. When I was a teacher, I read to my class every day. I always have two books on the go – a print book and an audiobook. As well as having favourite authors, I also have favourite readers and sometimes I choose a talking book by an author I have never read, simply because I know I will enjoy the reader’s performance.

 

 

Listening to an audiobook adds an extra dimension of pleasure. Narrating a story is a truly specialist skill. The narrator has to tell the story so as to convey character and atmosphere, but without his/her voice intruding on the listener’s consciousness. That’s quite a tall order.

 

 

I am proud that all my novels, under all three names, are narrated by the talented Julia Franklin, who has been a favourite reader of mine ever since I heard her read Our Polly by Anna Jacobs back in the early 2000s.

 

Here she is recording one of my books.

 

A lot of work goes into Julia's preparation for her narration work. It isn't just a matter of reading the book. She has to consider all the characters and gain a full sense of what they're like as individuals, and decide how best to show their personalties in her performance.

 

 

One of the best compliments I have ever received as an author came from Julia - when she said that, in preparing to narrate The Railway Girls, there was a point in the story where she had to stop reading and simply sit quietly on her own and come to terms with an incident in the book.

 

Including the two I am currently writing for, I have written for a total of five publishers of print books, but I have always been with the same audiobook publisher and I've always had the same narrator - Julia. Both these relationships are very important to me.

 

I don't know whether authors are supposed to listen to their own audiobooks, but I love listening to mine because I know that Julia will add a new dimension to what I've written, and I love that. She is truly the best in the business and I'm proud that my books share a stage with her.

 

 

I keep my old work diaries  and now and agin I have a flick through to see what I was up to at certain points.

 

This week back in 2021, I was halfway through writing Hope for the Railway Girls, book 5 in the series.

 
I've always had a soft spot for Margaret (the girl on the left, wearing dungarees), so it was a great pleasure to write from her viewpoint for the first time and let readers got to know her on a personal level.
 
It was also the first book to be published after I'd been allowed to 'out' myself and tell everyone that Maisie Thomas, Polly Heron and Susanna Bavin were all one and the same! I celebrated by writing about living in Llandudno in my letter to my readers in the back of the book.
 
Much of Hope was written beside the sea, here in this little bay....
 
 
 
When the tide was in, I sat on the steps to write....
 
 
 
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Link to The Railway Girls series on Amazon. For rasons best known to themselves, Amazon has just put books 1 - 7 on the series page, but remember there are also books 8 and 9.
 
 
 
 

 

I have just finished writing my 9-step guide (below) and now I’ve come hurrying back to the beginning because I want to make one thing clear. Never mind how the guide makes it seem – I am emphatically not a natural planner. I wrote for pleasure for years before I started writing for publication, and every single book I wrote back then was made up as I went along. I would know roughly how the story was going to end, and then I’d start writing with no real idea of how I was going to get there.

 

So, if you’re a pantser, don’t dismiss my guide as something you could never do, even in part. Trust me – a few years ago I would have said exactly the same…

 

Planner or pantser, I hope you’ll found something in here that you think will help you with your own writing. Good luck!

 
 

1. When planning a Home Front Girls book, I start by putting together the individual plots for the viewpoint characters – usually there are three – and discuss them with Jess, my editor at Bookouture. I value her input, firstly because she understands what will make the most satisfying book for the readers, and secondly because agreeing the plots in advance cuts down significantly on the editing process. Lots of writers tell me that planning the book in such detail would be impossible for them, and I always tell them that, to me, this is the structural edit!

 

2. I make a list of which day of the week was the first day of each month in the time-frame of the book. I also note what day of the week Valentine’s Day, Christmas Day etc took place, as well as the dates of Easter Sunday and the bank holidays. If you are going to hang your story on real events, you have to know the day and the date at all times, even if these dates aren’t specified within the narrative itself.

 

3. I list the important wartime events, with dates, so that the characters can talk about them and respond to them. I also list, with dates, things that happened on the home front. Changes to the rationing rules is an obvious example. I use the Radio Times website to make a note of what was on the wireless at the relevant times on particular days. (In one of my Railway Girls books, written as Maisie Thomas, I mentioned a concert organist by name, courtesy of this website, and a neighbour who reads my books came over the road to tell me, ‘His widow lives round the corner!’)

 

4. Do I need to sow the seeds of something that’s going to happen in a future book? For example, in A Wedding for the Home Front Girls, Louise discusses her ambition with Lorna. Though nothing happens about this in Wedding, it paves the way for something that is going to happen in the future. One thing I can promise you is that every single thing in my plots happens for a reason… even if the reason won’t become apparent until a couple of books down the line.

 

5. Using a separate sheet of A4 for every scene, I write down the main points of each scene for each viewpoint character, including how each scene will end. For me, it’s essential to know from the outset how each scene finishes – and I don’t just mean in general terms. I mean, will it end on a note of tension/drama, or on an important question, or will there be an emotional moment? It has to be something that will make the reader anxious to carry on reading.

 

6. The viewpoint characters don’t have to have the same number of scenes, but it helps if they have approximately the same. Having said that, if one character’s plot requires more pages than the plots of the others, then I’m happy to let that unfold. It isn’t an exact science! It’s a question of telling the overall story in the most compelling way.

 

7. Each of these sets of plot-strands needs to be checked against the dates. My books are woven around real events and the individual plots reflect this. (I once read a book part of which happened to be set in December 1861 – but clearly the author hadn’t checked whether anything of national importance had taken place at that time and consequently none of the characters mentioned the death of Prince Albert…)

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8. Now the scenes for the viewpoint characters have to be merged together into a single sequence. I love doing this, because it’s a big step forward in creating the book. It is also time now to make notes about the links and overlaps between the various plot-lines. Female friendship and the ways in which women support one another always form a strong theme within my books, and I add ideas for ways in which this support can manifest itself.

 

9. Next I put the scenes into a month-by-month time-line, starting at the end of the book. Why start at the end? Because this is what everything is building up to. I know it sounds more sensible to start a time-line at the beginning, and I’m sure that’s probably what most people would feel more comfortable with, but I find it easier to start at the end and work backwards. At this point, I go through the individual scenes to add references to details of life on the home front and other real events. Many of these references are date-sensitive, but obviously there are others that aren't. These details can only be added to a scene if they fit there naturally. Yes, books take a lot of research, but it must never look like research – it must be woven seamlessly into the narrative.

 

So there are the 9 steps that go into my planning of each of my Home Front Girls books. After that, it’s time to start writing!

 

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The Home Front Girls series on Amazon

 



 

 

Why Readers Skip Parts of Novels

Posted on 16th May, 2025

How many books do you read in a year? And do you read them in full? I know some people have a rule that once they start a book, they have to finish it. Me, I could never do that. I used to, when I was a lot younger. I can remember one book I had to force myself to carry on with even though I wasn't enjoying it at all - but I thought that if it was good enough to be published, then it must be worth reading.

 

Of course, reading is a very personal thing. My dad read crime and biographies and nothing else. My mum read sagas and nothing else. I used to be a librarian specialising in work with chldren and schools and I used to encourage children to read widely... even though my own reading tastes as an adult are relatively limited.

 

So, yes, I do give up on a book if I'm not enjoying it. But this blog is about skipping bits and then carrying on reading. Do you ever do that? Why? Here are some of things that would make me flick forward a few pages.

 

Unnecessary Padding

In one novel, an architect spent an entire chapter wandering around a city, admiring its buildings and finding inspiration. It didn't advance the plot - or if it did, I missed that bit because I skipped to the next chapter. Yes, description is important. It creates the setting and contributes to the mood and atmosphere. It deepens the reader's relationship with the character and submerges the reader more fully in the book. But description for its own sake.... sorry, that doesn't work for me.

 

 

Being Lectured To

In a novel involving a theatre that exists in real life, the author had obviously done her homework - the operative word being 'obviously.' She couldn't stop herself sharing about every single thing she had learned about the theatre's history. It turned into a page and a half of lecture. Keep it to yourself, love. Just because you know it, doesn't mean the rest of us need to know.

 

 

Too Much Back Story

A bit of back story here and there is essential to an understanding of the plot, but entire chapters of it...? I once read a book that involved a family which, in spite of minor tensions, was clearly happy and united, with Mother as the lynch-pin. Early on in the plot, Mother died in a freak accident. How would her adoring husband cope? What fresh responsibilities would fall on the shoulders of our young heroine? What would happen next? What actually happened was a trip back in time to wander through Mother's childhood and see how she grew up to meet and marry Father. I wasn't interested in that - I wanted to know what happened next.

 

 

Am I skipping the parts of a book that represent the author's self-indulgence? The parts where the author, because s/he loves the book or the character so much, just can't resist adding more? Or am I missing chances to become more immersed in these stories? 

 

How about you? What makes you skip a part of a novel? And what do you think of what I've identified as my own triggers for skipping?

 

Secrets Make The Best Stories

Posted on 8th May, 2025

This week, I'm delighted to share my review The Santorini Writing Retreat of by Eva Glyn, which is published on May 22nd.

 

 


The Santorini Writing Retreat

by Eva Glyn

 

A new book from the pen of Eva Glyn is always a treat. This story is emotional and life-affirming, and the sun-soaked setting will have you reaching for the travel brochures.

 

Welcome to the beautiful island of Santorini, where bestselling author Jessica Rose is about to lead a writers’ retreat. But Jessica is battling with her personal demons, and she’s not the only one.

 

 

With Eva Glyn, you always get a rich and cleverly-constructed plot, with characters whose true selves are gradually peeled back layer by layer. You also get a wonderful sense of place. Creating vivid descriptions of the various settings is one of Eva Glyn’s great strengths, and in this book there are also mouthwatering descriptions of Greek food.

 

The three viewpoint characters have to have up to issues including friendships and other relationships, long-held secrets and personal courage. Although some of the issues are deep, they are handled with a lightness of touch that makes them very relatable. If you like your characters to be old enough to have a past, this story will quickly draw you in.

 

 

 

 

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To pre-order, click here.  

 

To visit Eva's author page on Amazon, click here

 

 

 

Wedding Hats On, Everyone!

Posted on 2nd May, 2025

I'm writing this on publication day for A Wedding for the Home Front Girls. First of all, I want to say a huge and heartfelt thankyou to all the readers who ordered the book in advance.

 

 

 

Here are my publication day flowers - aren't they gorgeous?

 

 

 

And the reviews are already appearing on Amazon from the NetGalley readers (thank you if you're one of them):

 

"I loved reading this book, and read it in one sitting."

 

"This is the fourth book in the series and still just as exciting as the first book was. There are always lots of interesting facts put into the books about things that did happen during World War 2. I have come to love these girls over the series, and I felt so much for Sally, and it was lovely to see her relationship with her mum grow."

 

"Another brilliant book in this series."

 

" I have loved every book and it’s always a joy to be reunited with Sally, Betty and Lorna, who by now, feel very much like my own chums! This book touches upon some very personal heartache, particularly for Sally - and these scenes were emotional but also quite shocking in the way such matters were handled decades ago, in comparison to the modern day. But once again, the girls are an example of how love, friendship and kindness can be enough to get one another through the worst of times."

 

"The dialogue is wonderful and the girls’ mishaps and encounters keep us on our toes from beginning to end. The remarkable resilience of civilians during wartime truly shines from these pages.

 

"The book was well researched and well written and frankly a delight to read. I look forward to the next one which we know is coming."

 

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Here is the link in case you need it. Wedding is available on Kindle and also on Kinde Unlimited.

 

 

 

 

Wedding on NetGalley

Posted on 19th April, 2025

This week I'm taking a look at some of the reviews for A Wedding for the Home Front Girls that have been posted on NetGalley in advance of publication.

 

Huge thanks to all the NetGalley readers/reviewers. Yoru contributios make a real difference.

 

 

"... this absolutely beautiful heartwarming saga... another fulfilling story, of love, friendship, heartache and above all working on together during WW2."

 

"If there is one thing this book teaches you it’s not to prejudge people... The bonus was getting to the end to discover that there will be another one, can’t wait."

 

"A wonderful addition in the series. A feel good read full of hopes and dreams."

 

"...(the) wartime backdrop is carefully crafted, and the story is full of heart and sensitivity. I'm already looking forward to the next in the series."

 

"Aww, its like reading a letter from friends. I loved being back with the girls and it felt like it seamlessly left off from where the other one ended."

 

"This is the fourth book in the series and still just as exciting as the first book was... I have come to love these girls over the series, and I felt so much for Sally, and it was lovely to see her relationship with her mum grow."

 

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Pre-order link - £1.99 on Kindle

 

News From the Home Front

Posted on 11th April, 2025

 

Well, I don't mind telling that I've been dying to use the above picture. I couldn't wait to show you the five Home Front Girls books all in a row.

 

Book 5, A Baby for the Home Front Girls, has now had its official cover reveal, so at last I'm able to feature it here on my website. Isn't it gorgeous?

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 Pre-order it on Kindle here.

 

And here's the blurb...

 

Manchester, 1942: With war raging in the skies, can the Home Front Girls find the happiness they so deserve?

 

When Betty and her best friend Sally discover a baby tucked in a blanket amongst the rubble at the Manchester Salvage Depot, they can barely believe their eyes. As Betty holds the baby in her arms, she feels a familiar longing stir in her chest. Might she and her husband be allowed to care for this abandoned child, and create the family they have always longed for?

 

Sally is shocked when she realises she too has news: she’s pregnant and the two friends begin planning for the new arrival. But with Andrew serving overseas, and Sally’s health a cause for concern, she must do everything she can to care for the precious life inside her.

 

When the grandparents of the abandoned baby are found, Betty’s heart breaks. She has grown to love this child if she was her own, and she’ll do whatever it takes to provide a safe home for this baby. Then Sally’s health takes a dramatic turn for the worst, and an anxious night is spent waiting for news as the residents of Star House rally to support one another.

 

With two precious lives to fight for, the future feels more perilous than ever before. Will Betty finally become the mother she has always wanted to be? And will Sally be able to give her husband the most precious homecoming gift of all?

 

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This fifth book in The Home Front Girls series is an absolutely gripping and heart-wrenching romantic saga.

 

Readers love The Home Front Girls series:

 

I loved this!immediately got me hookedperfect… I honestly couldn’t wait to get stuck in… had me quickly flying through the pages. I was sad to finish it but so happy to have read it. They are so addicting! Next one needed stat.’ stuck_in_the_book_loop ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

 

A big tear jerker! full of love, companionship, friendship… Fantastic… big five stars.’ NetGalley reviewer ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

 

So so good I just could not put this down. Full of family, friendship and companionship, it will pull at all your heartstrings.’ Goodreads reviewer ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

 

What a joy to read!… a delightful offering of friendship, love, duty, bravery and resilience… wonderfulmade me smile throughout.’ the.bookjunction ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

 

Completely gorgeous!… Heartwarming… Perfect… Will have you grinning ear to ear.’ coffeeandpages2021 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

 

 

 

Top of the Railway Girls Sales

Posted on 5th April, 2025

I imagine you know what royalties are? This is the way authors get paid - it is our cut of the money earned from the sales of our books. Traditionally, royalties were paid twice a year, in the spring and the autumn, in each case for the previous six-month period, though now some of the newer publishers have different royalty periods.

 

Having had my latest six-monthly statement, I thought you might like to know which of my Railway Girls books, written as Maisie Thomas, came out on top in the royalty stakes...

 

 

 

Well, the top seller in the previous six months was....

 

Courage of the Railway Girls

 

This was the book that introduced both Emily and Persephone as viewpoint characters. It was such a pleasure to let them open up to the readers and reveal their true thoughts and feelings.

 

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Blurb:

Manchester, 1943

Emily is enjoying her new job as a station porter until she learns that a trusted friend at work may be involved in something underhand...

Persephone's romance with Matt is blossoming - but can two people from such different walks of life really make a go of it?

All is going well with wedding planning for Mabel until someone divulges a secret about Harry, which could threaten their future.

As war rages around them, the railway girls must face their own battles. With the support of one another, will they make the right decisions when it comes to matters of the heart?

 

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At the time of writing this blog, the paperback price on Amazon is £3.11.